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Post by garrett on Jan 24, 2012 20:39:46 GMT -5
Very good writing here, and that's a pretty song, tweed. I used to write songs and poetry a lot, but that seems to have gone with age. Fun, tho. Would love to see more of all your writings. Thank you, bella. I get all of these verses caught iin my head. Don't know if I can explain that. Here is another verse, that is alluding to something, but I won't say what it is. I just want to see if someone gets it. Right lane sees things clearer Won't take her back again Left lanes twistin in the miirror Wonderin where the hell she's been That make sense? Steve could say right lane represents an old relationship?an ex lover or perhaps drugs? left lane is the future?perhaps the unknown or a new relationship?trying to figure her out>?
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Post by bella on Jan 24, 2012 22:56:41 GMT -5
Ok. The right lane is the past, and you can't/won't take her back because you remember what happened.
Left lane is the future which you can't see clearly, but you're still thinking about her.
That sounds complicated, but most of us could relate to it??
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Post by tweed on Jan 24, 2012 23:46:08 GMT -5
Ok. The right lane is the past, and you can't/won't take her back because you remember what happened. Left lane is the future which you can't see clearly, but you're still thinking about her. That sounds complicated, but most of us could relate to it?? I like your guess, bella, but nope. Look again.............This time , look at it as you are a woman coming off of an abusive relationship. Steve
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Post by tweed on Jan 24, 2012 23:47:05 GMT -5
Thank you, bella. I get all of these verses caught iin my head. Don't know if I can explain that. Here is another verse, that is alluding to something, but I won't say what it is. I just want to see if someone gets it. Right lane sees things clearer Won't take her back again Left lanes twistin in the miirror Wonderin where the hell she's been That make sense? Steve could say right lane represents an old relationship?an ex lover or perhaps drugs? left lane is the future?perhaps the unknown or a new relationship?trying to figure her out>? You are just a little warmer, Garrett. Steve
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Post by garrett on Jan 25, 2012 10:11:50 GMT -5
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Post by bella on Jan 25, 2012 13:45:46 GMT -5
Goodness, I honestly don't know; this could be anything. Go for it, garrett, or anyone.
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Post by garrett on Jan 28, 2012 11:51:34 GMT -5
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Post by tweed on Jan 29, 2012 13:53:03 GMT -5
Goodness, I honestly don't know; this could be anything. Go for it, garrett, or anyone. LOL Okay, here is what it is: The right lane of the road is not clouded by love or bad decision making. It just offers to take her away.........and will. The left lane twisting in the mirror wondering where she has been eludes to her abusive boyfriend or husband, who is now behind her. Make sense? Steve
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Post by garrett on Jan 29, 2012 14:21:31 GMT -5
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Post by bella on Jan 31, 2012 0:13:04 GMT -5
Yes, it does. Did you finish that, or just write that part?? Would love to see some more of your writings if you care to share.
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Post by garrett on Jan 31, 2012 0:14:27 GMT -5
i second the motion.smiles
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Post by tweed on Jan 31, 2012 3:11:01 GMT -5
Yes, it does. Did you finish that, or just write that part?? Would love to see some more of your writings if you care to share. Part of it, although I do have another verse to it: The right hand of the law Refused to see what his left hand was doing They had all the gall But she was suffering the ruining Sorry if this all sounds corny. I cannot explain how many verses I get in my head and I just let them slip away. I need to write them down. Actually, about 15 years ago, I wrote another prose/song for an ex-gf tht is sexy, hot & racy. Although it would probably sell 50 million copies in todays world, I am not sure if it would play here. LOL Not even sure if I can remember the words. Nevertheless, thanks for all the kind words, my friends. Steve
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Post by garrett on Jan 31, 2012 20:58:20 GMT -5
you go boy!!!!!!!!!!!! smiles
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Post by bella on Feb 1, 2012 1:29:24 GMT -5
Not corny at all. Ya, I bet your song would sell real well these days; lol Used to write some of the cryin' in your beer type country songs in the days when they were popular, but don't know if I can remember them anymore, either. ;D
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Post by tweed on Feb 1, 2012 3:16:23 GMT -5
Not corny at all. Ya, I bet your song would sell real well these days; lol Used to write some of the cryin' in your beer type country songs in the days when they were popular, but don't know if I can remember them anymore, either. ;D I L-O-V-E that stuff, Bella. It is honest music. Today's country just sucks, for the most part. I like hard core country, bluegrass & blues. Real music for real people. Nothing romanticized. Gimme some lyrics! Steve
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Post by bluelacedredhead on Feb 4, 2012 17:58:26 GMT -5
I got a phonecall today from someone I worked with 25 years ago. We found each other on FAcebook recently and today she decided to phone. Seems she used to write a lot, but has had a few years of writers block. Any suggestions from the writers here what to do to get the words flowing again??
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Post by txdirtdog on Feb 4, 2012 22:21:01 GMT -5
Believe it or not Blue, my wife's company just put on a seminar for music artists. One of the speakers was a nutritionist (eating right on the road is not an easy thing). One of the things she touched on is if you are having difficulty writing, check your gut - not necessarily your brain. If the flora in your gut are not right, it can cause a writing block as some of the creativity originates in the gut.
So probiotics and things like that can influence creativity - and of course a decent diet.
Hope this helps.
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Post by bluelacedredhead on Feb 5, 2012 8:38:06 GMT -5
Makes perfect sense to me. I suspect that general state of her health is part of the issue.
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Post by garrett on Feb 7, 2012 1:48:03 GMT -5
well lord knows i got the gut to write? rotfl
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Post by garrett on Feb 14, 2012 1:10:16 GMT -5
get er dones ya'lls.
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